All Comments on 'The Tattooed Woman Pt. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So, the crone took care of the Abhartach sent to the shrine by that evil overlord all by herself. Her sleeping spells are pretty potent, eh? Potent enough to also send someone to sleep who normally doesn't seem to sleep at all, can visualize clear paths through the mist, and is neither affected by whip nor lightning. Obviously, there's more to the crone, tall and dark-haired as she may look, flicking a strand of hair from a sleeping woman's face. ;-)

I'm intrigued at how she'll fare with the next set of hostile visitors.

Azure's reaction to the landscape opening up along that mist path sure IS cute. Ash has swiftly found a replacement for the blacksmith after he was adopted by the orcs. The evil warlord's army may have drawns the dwarves into war. And Gorsini really has a very bad stroke of luck. Is it me or does he look like a guy who gets himself a deeper hole with each good intention? All in all lots of stuff going on simultaneously. Love it. :D

Cheers

- AshFan01

WolfenherzWolfenherzover 1 year ago

I love your writing, damn great story.

Fibroidkey794Fibroidkey79410 months ago

Amazing as always, the way you continue to build on the world and bring new characters into the story.

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The Tattooed Woman - 16 March: Chapter 1 of Tattooed Woman edited (again), rewritten and now on site. Changes in this version are based on constructive criticism I received. So, lets see what you think. Part 42 being written, in the offing and coming soon. Dramatis Perso...

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