by Gortmundy
Someone asked for a bit more Maggie, so hope this fulfils. See, I do read the comments. All the best.
Another very good read Sir. Thanks for the time and effort.
I think you need to think about a type of creature that is big, powerful and ugly then have a battalion of them on hand to take on the ogre guard you introduced in this chapter.
And now I find myself in that annoying place of being in the middle of a very enjoyable story and waiting impatiently for the next chapter. [sigh] However, I'm not going to rush you (no matter how tempting). Keep up the good work.
loved the fight with NYX, it was well written and I think your story is a fine story.
Another excellent chapter, sir, thank you very much! I do wonder now and again as to the future of Cassie, as there must be more to her than even she knows. She has forged a deep bond with the Tattooed Lady, has the favor of the Queen of Night and was able to wield her staff, and has very nearly charmed the panties off a young dragon.
Could it be that her soul is somehow tied to the Queen of Night?
So freaking good. Ash and Nyx pulled it off again, this time with a primary assist from Lily. So smart, so bold. I just love 'em. All the power to House Varro.
Also, your writing (especially the dialogues) and your storytelling are droolworthy, absolutely top notch. Keep it coming. :-)
-AshFan01
Once again you maintain this brilliant tale with an exciting chapter.
Quite the clever use of the language and dialects used throughout being associated to the various characters.
Nice touch with the Maggie segment.
Anxiously awaiting the next installment.
-DBK
Spectacular reading . The battles , the hierachies , the lovers , the secrets , the scandals and betrayals , The evil , and the heroes . So good , every chapter filled with gripping adventure .
Thank you so much .
Another great chapter from a story that answers the question, "What if Fritz Lieber was edited by the writing staff of Ted Lasso?"
The flashback as it is the first one in 25 chapters was utterly confusing.
While it serves its purpose and is of the samexstellar quality then the rest of the story, I would move it. You don´t need flashbacks. You´re this good that you can do it with simple foreboading.
SSC on mobile.
I love all the references, from Star Wars to Shakespeare..thanks for sharing this story with U.S.
See my forst comment — U.S. must be us - stupid spellingchecker - I live in Europe