by Gortmundy
Thank you!
This story is the most promising I’ve read in a long time and I’m looking forward to see how it’s progressing.
Interesting characters, a plot that stimulates my imagination, good writing.
Not to many parallel side stories so it’s easy to follow.
I’m waiting for the next instalment with anticipation 😀😀
Wow . So many layers to this tale . All well told , with each an interesting lot . Enjoying a looking forward to more .
Love it, so many great things happening, and wonderfull writing. Could you please add a list of characters somethimes? Getting hard to keep up with everyone.
I am about half-way through writing the next chapter, which might be a bit longer than this one, and I've been working on a castlist of characters (promise). Glad you folks are enjoying things so far.
Gortmundy you have a way with words and it’s so easy for a reader to be totally immersed in the tale. It’s wonderful to see Hildegard coming into her own. I’m loving the story and keep looking for updates. Thank you for sharing your talent with us,
Every chapter with The Morrigan is a good chapter. Excellent character, great multi-layered dialogues. Further, the drow huntress seems to be a dangerous foe. Ashunara's clash with her hunting pack should be a bloody affair.
But that flashback by Hildegard to the night of Ash's departure party had me confused at first. That jump back in time occurred without introduction or change of tempus.
-AshFan01
I caught up? I have to wait on chapters now? Oh woe is me. I brilliant story to be sure,keep on the good work!
I must admit, I fair cried at this: "The Dark Elf nodded cheerfully, not noticing the look of horror that crossed Ellén's features as she imagined how such a terrifying event might unfurl."
Just enough detail with each focus character not to slow things down, but enough detail and convoluted writing to be extremely interesting!