All Comments on 'The Tattooed Woman Pt. 30'

As always so impressed with your maneuvering of the various foes and characters within each faction . All of them dark and cleverly and calculatingly scheming . So deep and dark and with wit and humor . And most of all badass warrior women of all types . I won't go on and on . But I could . Well done G . The third volume will be epic .

Well done. Good luck with your break, and look forward to more when you come back. :-)

Just started a couple of weeks ago, and looks like I caught up in time for 2nd volume conclusion. I thought the start was just ok, But as I read on the characters and plot grew on me.

I'll try to make some more specific comments at sone point. But with a wee bit of infdrence from the story and comments, I imagine the NPCs in your games are a lot of fun :)

Lefson, I agree. The start was "ok". So I rewrote quite a lot of the beginning couple of chapters. I just havent posted the edited stuff here. I usually run the chapters through my hardest critics (wife and daughter) and that was both their considered opinions. They both said the edited stuff was an improvement, but that it still needed a litle work.

Gortmundy,

For shame on you, I nearly had a heart attack! Take a break indeed! This story should be published. Just so I can buy it and enjoy it again and again. Truly, the quality of your craft is simply beyond any superlatives I might grace unto your workmanship .

That being said, don't be getting the big head. Now back to work with yourself. Your readers are eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

MaryKate Johnson

Thank you!

Thank you for another excellent chapter.

Yea that little wheel of death just kept spinning

Great read thank you . Like Mary said I wait with baited breath !

txcracker

i search for new entries to this story every few days its an amazing thing to follow thanks very much for this story

Looking forward to the next instalment.

very good. Thehistory is enticing. Characters are groomed well so a muliple plot story is enticing in each tread. Really your story is going up with each chapter.

keep it up. Only found another writer able to do this and she's now top ten every week.

Outstanding!!!

Really, really great character development and so many intricacies in plot development as well. Finely crafted, excellent dialogue, the pacing is perfect, and everything about this saga is thoroughly engaging - just extremely well done. You truly are skilled and I am most definitely impatiently waiting for what will come next.

I’m in agreement with all the ‘well dones’. Nice mix of POVs that swap between good guys and bad guys plus the sections that promise much for future chapters. Nothing like finishing with a cliffhanger like this one. Great job.

Thank you for letting us feast upon your craft once again.

Recently found this and am enjoying it tremendously.

Holy shit you nearly gave me a heart attack with your "I think I'm going to take a break here and leave it for a while." Nailbiting, wonderful storytelling.

Rounded characters. Would have liked more backstory on Dullahan

I will eagerly await the next instalment. Enjoy the break.

Enjoyed this immensely so far - Outstanding work! Thank you

Really enjoying the series. Unfortunately, I have read all of the stories over a weekend and `now anxiously awaiting the next installment.

Story line great. Please hurry with next installment.

Simply amazing. Your characters and story pacing is tremendously entertaining. Thanks.

Great chapter to close out volume 2. Like almost every player gets an appearance, xept The Morrigan and her main opponent, the evil entity. I'm very curious about what Shalidar and the ancient dark elf mage will come up with. Also, nice to catch a glimpse of Kasa-Dur. :-)

Now, the snare has been put around Ash and her band, but the trap has been sprung too early. Good cliffhanger.

-AshFan01

Please don't disappear. I really look forward to reading this!

Excellent, great storyline

well written, and an entertaining read

Love it

Been bingeing this story, perhaps a little too fast. So now I have some comments that I present in questions.

1. Why is Garok in the fae? He was teacking the kidnapped dwarves. I did not get the impressiob that Gorsini's conteact came from the fae.

2. Why is there only one light elf? Where do the white elves live?

3. Who can breed with who? Garrow is a half orc. Dana is a half elf. It has been stated that orcs are too large to have sex with dark elves. So are all halfbreeds coming from a human and some other race?

Otherwise, keep the story coming.

Outstanding work, reminiscent of Tolkien in its scope and weaving, but not quite in its depth, although achieving that level of backstory would be all but impossible. I am impressed by your ability to make me relate to the characters. I like it when the good guys are likeable, and the bad guys are detestable, and when there are a few who make me wonder if they are good or bad while I wait for them to show their true colors (Shalidar). I also like that I sometimes wonder whose story is being told; Ashunara's, Cassie's, or perhaps Adair's? Even the title doesn't nail it down for certain, as any of the main characters could yet reveal a tattoo that has significance. Can't wait to see where you take this tale. Thank-you so much for your work!

What an absolutely, superbly told tale

I hope not to see an end to this tale any time soon !!!!

So far, so very good!

Thanks for your efforts and skill in writing this story.

Come upon this unexpectedly, and have basically been useless these past hours engrossed in it. A marvelous gaggle you are creating, and among other things I'm learning tons of new words and bits of myth and history as your writing is stuffed full of things new to me. The story is engrossing, though getting ever more complex, and I expect my next couple of days I will be fairly useless as I try to inhale the rest of this tale to get caught up. Bravo!

Like the Black Company and Taltos all in one!

Not as erotic as some, but a riveting, entertaining tale. Five stars and I hope to see more of this saga soon!

When Hildegard commented on Garrow’s hair looking like a highland cow, I thought “Hairy Coo.”