All Comments on 'The Tattooed Woman Pt. 33'

Thank you for another great chapter. I look forward to each new part.

Brilliant as always; my only suggestion would be inserting a précis/character guide/reminder of which campaigns are happening and the characters in them as it’s becoming a complex tale!

I'm loving everything about this! The sub-plots are well paced and keep the narrative moving forward. And the dialog as always iss great.

Thank you for another great chapter.

I love this series. Keep up the good work. Thanks.

Yea, I keep meaning to add an index, or legend, and I keep getting distracted. Then, of course, I write a bit more and add another character and then another, and... Yea, you get the idea. But I will! Promise. It just might take um, a while <God, I sound pathetic, lol>

I have been addicted to this story from the beginning. Love how you bring your characters to life. Each one has all

The flaws and strengths one would expect Inthe mixed group. I really look forward to your chapter Gortmundy.

Thanks for creating this fabulous work.

I found this series around chapter 28 and was hooked from the beginning. Then, like a glutton, I spoiled myself reading chapter after chapter. Unfortunately I caught up all too soon. So now like an addict I'm excited when a new chapter is released but all to soon it's over and I'm left waiting for my next fix lol. Great story, with... almost said "real" people haha. But relatable instead of " white knights" with flawlessly pure morals and intentions. Please, keep the doses coming.

I’m in agreement with the other comments. Well written , good action and character development. The index might work but short POVs can be as effective.

The Merrows cloak gives you lots of options now. Invisible? Impervious to dragon breath?

I’m hoping for a full on battle at the temple ruins between the crone and the other dragons. Thanks for the hard work. The other Dave

Nice cleanup of that epic battle. The death toll of Ash's crew is pretty low. Of course, having Adair and Ellén at their side was very helpful.

Really enjoyed the episode with the Merrow, Ellén, and the Crone. The latter is an absolute scene stealer whenever she takes the stage. Her appearances are worth the reading alone. And then all these little subplots. Hangover Hilde is hilarious! But now I fear for Shalidar. I have forgotten if she has a plan B when the evil entity comes calling for her. Man, that's gunna be a nail-biting wait till the next chapter.

-AshFan01

Another GR8 and exciting , teasing but filled with XLNT content . Till the next .

I love this story and look forward to it's long and wonderfully fun story ark.

Thanks

Absolutely love this story. You have created some strong warrior bitches. Your characters are smart, funny, crazy, and full of faults, and they are wonderful. I am a huge fantasy nerd, and this is such a good story line I got to the end and was disappointed the next chapter hadn't appeared by the time I was done. can't wait for next one.

Loved it!

Wenn ich das Geld hätte, würde ich mir glatt die Filmrechte sichern ;-)

Superb! You craft a story extremely well! Top marks to you, you certainly deserve them. Scots words too - fair braw!

Lacking.

Not the story or the writing, which be most excellent.

But where’s the map.

All good/great fantasy fiction has a map.

And being that illustrations are allowed, well….

"girning" - love it

Very nice. Onto ch. 34.

Keep it up laddie.

"Send others to this 'Morrigan's Stone'."

Here we go again...

Such a fucking wonderfully story

superb stuff as always