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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Total Rubbish

Dont bother writing any more

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantover 11 years ago
Ashon is a rolific ...

submitter, not writer. These stories are all the same - girls who have just turned eighteen who can't wait to spread their legs for the first guy who asks them more or less nicely

I like fantasy, too - but Bro Ashon's defloration stories are mechanical in nature - no tension, no suspense - not good stroke material - the fantasy is not developed, but just stamped out like parts in an auto plant

DWornockDWornockover 11 years ago
4****

Only very good looking and sexy hot guys can fuck 4 pretty teenage girls in one night. For most guys that is only a delightful fantasy.

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