All Comments on 'The Teddy and The Panties'

The structure, story line and most of all the way the loving was described was perfect (IMHO anyway and that's what I care about!) Can't wait for more installments.

You are scoring 100% with me on both of your stories. I can't wait to read the rest of the installments to their story. Please continue.

Sorry, but your writing is childish.

great imagination or the telling of a true tale??

Katie, That first paragraph just blew me away. Girls definitely have more fun.

I love your story! Your writing style is captivating to say the least. Paired with your amaizing characters and the fact that they are young hot lesbians, is even more appealing. I think you write exceptionally well, and please do continue. I read this story then had to read your other lesbian story, and was completely sattisfied.

Good follow on and a good erotic story. You do write well so please just continue writing your doing well. No complaints from me.

Loved it. I had to back track and read the first story and then re read the 2nd again. I lhats look forward to more.

Thanks,

Rob

PS to the obtuse SOB that wrote that the writing was "childish", that is not being constructive. That’s just being mean. At least when Simon Cowel says a harsh remark he at least gives a reason why. Please direct yourself to the “being a asshole” fetish room…2nd door on the left.

Absolutely amazing.

Loved these stories of Katie & Alison. They are great. You should keep on writing more stories about them.

I enjoyed reading this story it is fantastic. I hope you will write more about them.

I love reading about Katie & Alison. Both stories have been great. Please write another story about them soon.

I have to say I absolutely love your writing. I'm newly eighteen and I'm a lesbian. I've had an experience like these that Alison has had and must say that the way you write is very amazing and hot. keep writing and if you could please please please add on to your other story the unexpected one with alison and her team mate

Sweet & highly erotic!

very sexy i would love to read more from these two.

You're kidding me!!! There HAS to be more than this. They become inseparable, go to college, move in together, or was mom watching from the stairs??? You have GOT to do more on these two!!! Both stories were excellent!!

Please write more i love your writing I read the first three times then I read this one, please write more about the two.

wow you need to write more about his two lovers

plssssssss.:)