All Comments on 'The Terminal Virgin'

Can hardly wait for chapter 2.

c'mon next chapter....

I remember you posted several chapters of several different (and promising) stories last spring. Then you suddenly stopped posting altogether. I hope you're back to stay this time. Maybe even continue or at least conclude the stories you left hanging.

This is another good story. In fact, I like all your stories. I especially like the way you build up and tease the reader without being harsh or forceful, causing me to use my imagination and my mind. I don't know about other women, but, I enjoy your stories and I'm glad you two are writing again.

very good. next chapter please!

Very believable: step by step development of the, um, situation. I liked the reference to Literotica, too. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I thought this story was really good. I hope you continue it. The daughter is so shy and innocent I can't wait to see where their relationship ends up being.

It's a shame there isn't more erotica with such cute daughters like Cathy.

I love your stories. They all deserve 5 stars. There are, however, so many beginnings. I'd love more consummation. I love the slow build-ups but they have to go somewhere. Pleeeeez consummate.

I love your story telling and building of characters but in the several stories of yours I've read that's as far as they go; you don't finish them.You're like the high school prick teaser, lots of build up but never a finish. Please don't leave us with our hands in our pants and nothing to finish with. Like I said, love the story and what should be a 5 is only a 2 because it just stops when it was starting to get good.

Wow, what a great start, I hope that you finish it.

The title says enough.

Love where this is going

Terribly long and teasing, but beautifully written and inexorably arousing. Can't wait to read your sequel/continuation. I think father and daughter have a great future life in front of them. Thanx.

I wish you'd come back and write again! You've got skills!