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Click here"Don't remove the plug until I come back out and I will remove it for you. You are not to take it out yourself under any circumstances. Do you understand?"
Poor, wicked, literal-minded Bee wagged her plugged bottom in my face and laughed. "Big plans for Miss today, big plans..."
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End of Chapter 1
Be sure to read Chapter 2 to find out what happens next!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 11 years agoYou write so well. Sometimes I wonder if your stories are real life expierenes.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI would love to be in your place. You are very lucky Victoria.
- Patti
Anonymousover 13 years agoI surprised my girl, with a hotel weekend, surprising her with another girl, a "maid" who was introduced in darkness, and toys etc.. Your story is classic, I'd love to share. Tim
Privates1stClassalmost 15 years agoVery different than most stories I've found on Literotica. Well written -- I'm wondering what's coming next. At this point we have just enough information to want more.
victoria.vixenover 18 years agoAuthorlucky:
Charlotte Brontë often employed these second person asides to the reader; I understand they're not to everyone's taste. I think you describe their intended effect quite nicely:
"It felt as though you were telling me the story over a cup of coffee and that only served to make everything more real."
Thanks for your feedback.
lucky-E-levenover 18 years ago...method of speaking directly to the reader in the midst of the story. Typically, I don't care for this but you managed to make it work. It felt as though you were telling me the story over a cup of coffee and that only served to make everything more real. I look forward to reading on in the series.
~lucky
KRover 18 years agoWhat a lovely series. Makes me so wet, reading it. Very well done, especially way you revealed the primary character's inner thoughts.
Anonymousover 18 years agoLove your writing style and this very interesting and erotic story line. I look forward to the next chapter.
