All Comments on 'The Things Better Left Unsaid Ch. 01'

and couldn't find a bit of rust. Seriously, though, this story was very nicely done and I can't wait for the next chapter. Cliffhangers always do that to me. I love the anticipation.

This was so fucking hot! I read it twice and cummed both times. Their innocence and passion is raw and powerful.

You should definitely keep writing... please do! I would have suggested a bit about Demi's feelings over the hallway encounter as she was rushing to leave for school, just to build more foundation for what followed when she returned. But you did nicely explore the feelings her dad had been having toward her. And you left lots of room for story development (in effect, "foreplay"). We hope to read more about this erotic adventure.

You should seek an editor, there were some typos that; although minor, disturbed the flow of the story. Also, no need to preface your story with how you don't personally condone incest. In reality, I don't many people who read these stories do. We are all just a bit fucked up in the head :)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I liked it and hope there will be more chapters coming to this story. Good job!!

chapter 2 quickly

Amazing! Need chapter 2.

This is so Hot! Please don't stop. I am going to watch everyday for a continuance. 5 Stars.

I have to agree with one of the previous comments, not one bit of rust. You did a wonderful job bringing life to your characters and creating a sensual scene. It was sexy and enticing. I look forward to the next chapter. Please continue!

Whew! That's great. Cant wait for more.

Great buildup and plot. Love how the daddy takes such good care of his baby girl! Excited for the next chapter:)

More please!

Great story! Please don't leave us hanging...we need to know what happens next!!

I really liked it. I hope you continue.

Deeply beautiful and emotional... thanks!

Please continue this

Amazing... please continue.

Thanks.

So I guess you're not doing chapter 2?

It was really good, I was disappointed when it ended and I saw it was posted 3 years ago 😢

What happened? We need chapter another chapter!