All Comments on 'The Third Revolution Ch. 01'

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LustKnight about 9 years ago

Off to a great start.

Anonymousabout 9 years ago

love it!

Fantastic start to a very promising story.

Anonymousabout 9 years ago

love the Rush lyrics!

swingerjoe about 9 years agoAuthor

Re. Rush lyrics

I love that someone got that reference! LOL.

Thanks to all for the feedback.

Anonymousabout 9 years ago

Long story vs short

Some may prefer shorter stories but then there are others like me that love long stories and we despair of them ending if they are good. The longest so far was 20 MB in size, many thousands in pages. I hardly ever read a published book anymore, there are so many good amateur writers.

Anonymousabout 8 years ago

Not only

Do I know the band I know the name of the song and it was either on "power windows" or "Exit stage left"

Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

Is this a communist america? What Is it?

Can I get some lore on this?

David_Brock 8 months ago

It's rare I give 5 stars, but this start was worth it.

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