All Comments on 'The Thirst Within Ch. 01'

Good start. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is an excellent way to start! Zak is so intriguing, and Oscar's innocence is remarkably well written. That last part I was reading and I noticed I was holding my breath. Continue by all means!

great start. i hope that you continue the story.

Already in love can't wait to read more

Thanks for the supportive comments. I just wanted a change from Louis and James. The 2 stories are in the same world and are linked through one way or another.

I'll leave that fro you to find out.

This is so HOT. I loved reading about "My Dark Angel" and now there's "The Thirst Within" with both set in the same world. Okay this is getting fun. Writer, keep writing more please.

Please write more... I really want to know if zak hurts oscar or not

This was a start that made me curious what else you had planned.

Okay so far - needs proofreading, though?

Anonymous, if you are interested in proof reading i would be happy to oblige. Also for any one else who wishes to beta-read simply drop me an email

Hooked already ! Oscar sounds sweet - a readhead ? Being one myself, I'm really rooting for him. As for Zack, well ... he sounds hot. Full of confidence, and a veni, vidi, vici attitude. I laughed when he told Oscar he wasn't used to being ignored !

Let's see what he's all about !

Like your other story this one needs a gammar check but is good overall. It seems a bit rushed too but I like Zak's character.