by escribe
I apologize to anyone who read this after also reading The War Effort. They are the same story. I was playing around with different titles and very minor changes to the story and inadvertently posted the same story twice. I'm interested in the internal conflicts the story presents and probably should have just let well enough alone.
A straight guy would find someone to fuck his brother, but not his wife, did you want a open marriage, cause you got one idiot.
An excellent story, with an unusual plot twist to boot. The story was totally believable and a really good read. Excellent grammar, punctuation and spelling here, with a nice flair for the erotic experience. The editing was generally good, but who in the world is Ron and how in the heck did he get in the bedroom with Beth??? Careful editing makes all the difference. Nevertheless, a great effort. Keep up the good work.
I imagined that Ray felt very sorry that his little brother Billy who would be going off to war and perhaps dying and never know the feeling of having sex with a woman.
It is a very sweet story.
Thanks for the read.
I thought this was a great gentle story. I hadn't read the other version. In a different era I recall my going to war. Wish I'd had a sister in law (and brother) like this lucky dude.
Really enjoyed this loving story about two brothers who care for each other. If Billy should, unfortunately, come home like so many others in a body bag, they will always treasure this night as having done something special for him, giving him that pleasure he never would have had otherwise.