by thickthighs_prettyeyes
I truly love this story great detail from the beginning to the end , very erotic made me hot and horny. Loved how you described your family and went into details like the colors of yours and your brother's eyes , little things like that help a story so much , like the cracking of twigs the moonlight and all made me feel like I was there as well .
Great story , thanks for sharing.
Love brother / sister stories and camping too. Very glad to see only one brother going at it and not a 3some. It reminded me in a way of my sis and I camping together :)
Nice Job!
So far, this is a fun story with many possibilities. I look forward to more.
I always like stories with background info leading to a sexual episode. I also like that all the characters involved don't need every body part measured exactly. Keep going.
Great start, looking forward to what happens next! Please continue.
You are a good writer. I’ve always loved your stories. Nice to see this new one.
I hope you continue the story. Need more info about the two boys.
Hope they have a three some and all share each other.
If the only way you will continue your own story is if people kiss your ass, don't bother.
I think if you didn't write more, you would make a lot of readers very unhappy. I particularly like the serendipity of the situation. It doesn't seem contrived in the least. GREAT START! Please keep going.
3 people that love each other, carrying that a little farther. Your character seems to closely match your profile, and it sounds like CeCe would be a really cool person to know, and a hot one to share a tent with!
I look forward to Part 2! Keep it up!
Please continue. I'm really enjoying this sexy story. I hope her fat ass is fucked by a raccoon and that porcupine quills get stuck in her giant honkers.
Great story. Please continue. I love sibling stories with an outdoor setting
Really liked it, keep going! Don't take notice of the creeps and their comments!!.. your a good writer and made it quite erotic..making it from a woman's perspective was even better and hotter...enjoyed it a lot!!
Well written. I really like the tone CeCe tells the story in. Calm, direct, and explicit, with a certain innocent lustiness that makes for a good read. Keep it up, I look forward to your next chapter. I'm sure you have the story planned out but please do not listen to Anon above regarding the raccoon or the porcupine. That's just so trailer park. If you feel like getting a little weird then aliens with anal probes are a much more acceptable way to go. I myself find the whole incest thing the perfect amount of weirdness. Have a good one!
Great hot story cries out for more and in the next chapter or two make it hotter with Cody, as the oldest brother he needs love from Cece too.....then maybe you can end it with a bang.....conclude the hottest erotic threesome ever.....Cece needs dp and more love from two adoring guys.....who just happened to be her brothers.....you write good sibling incest and five stars all two way.....good writing talent and skill shouldn't o to waste
Please keep writing. Checked your profile, your very beautiful and those eyes!!!
at work...ROCK HARD! Great Story! Wish I was one of your brothers ;)
I would definitely enjoy reading where you take this story from here
Love your story! Can’t wait for part 2. Any pictures to share? Duit4meplz@yahoo.com
Loved the story and yes it should continue over involving the other broth as well. It was well written and not only include the other brother buy possibly a threesome.