The Thrill of Defeat Ch. 01

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Again, I want to tell her off, and again, my body is way ahead of me. Before I know it, I'm staring at Alia's naked feet, and worse, my fingers are touching them -- clammy film of sweat and all. Under Alia's watchful gaze, I work her feet like I've done countless foot massages before, which of course, I haven't! I push in circular patterns from the heel to the sole, pulling delicately on each of her toes to make the joints pop and work out the stress. Then, I resume with my thumbs, pressing in circles all along the arch and the ankle, and then back down to the heel.

"You're so good at it!" Alia says, in a tone of admiration that sounds like, why am I only finding out now? And perhaps a little I could have used this before!

"I've never done this before," I say, although it comes out a lot softer than I've intended. "This is my first foot massage."

Alia's clever eyes are inquisitive as they study my face. I can almost see the gears turning inside her brain, the sadistic streak rearing its head. She doesn't know what's going on, and for that matter neither do I, but she's smelled prey, and she won't let go.

"You're coming with me to the club tomorrow night, okay?"

The mere fact that she's revisiting the subject upsets me. The fact that she's deliberately doing it as a way to test my reactions disturb me. But it's my meekness that really scares me. I've always been the only real check on Alia's penchant for casual bullying and mean snobbery. And now, that check is gone.

"Of course, Alia," I say in a low voice. No, not just low. Demure. Respectful. Obedient.

Submissive.

What is happening to me?

Alia flashes me a slow grin of triumph, looking at me with a glint in her eyes -- curiosity, but also ambition. It makes my knees quiver.

As her foot stench wafts around me and deeper into my nostrils, Alia speaks to me in a hesitant voice, as if trying to find her footing on new ground. Literally and metaphorically, perhaps.

"I don't know what's up with you today, but I like it when you're so agreeable. It suits you."

The words send shivers down my spine as I continue my massage. But they could never prepare me for the positive spasm of anticipation and fear caused by what she says next, as her grin widens and her voice grows lower, like a feline purr.

"I wonder what else you'll do for me... and let me do to you."

To be continued! Thanks for reading!

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AlectaShadowAlectaShadowover 1 year agoAuthor

Hi Anon! I will begin with a broad sweep to set the framework a little. As an author, I typically write about two major niches - foot fetish femdom stories, and gender-coded-submission maledom stories. Most (but not all) have mind control elements included. However, I would say that the one element that ties all my production together is emotional sadism. No matter the kinks and genders involved, my stories are always about emotional hurt as a form of enthrallment and arousal.

For Thrill Of Defeat specifically, which is also a commission, the core mechanic is the sisters' hypnotic foot scent. That is the lever used to secure Zainab's enslavement, and most chapters will devote a huge amount of attention to Zainab serving feet. But there are other accessory kinks featured in the story, such as body shaming/humiliation, forced shaving of hair, extreme findom, public humiliation, academic destruction, live-in slavery and maidification, sub sharing, pony riding, diet control, gaslighting, and emotional sadism.

Ultimately only you can decide if it's worth sticking around to see this on page, in spite of the heaps of foot fetish you'll have to wade through to get there. But ultimately all my femdom stories (and some of my maledom ones) include foot fetish. If you're not into it at all, then I am probably just not the right author for you, and that is okay. Fortunately, there's plenty of stories to make every niche happy out there.

Cheers, and have a good one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, it was starting to look good until the stench of her feet and figured that stinky feet will probably be the crux of the story. Too many other stories make worship of feet central to the story that it is something that is a turnoff for me. I guess there is a fetish out there but worshiping skinky feet (along with anything to do with scat) is not worth my time. Sorry, but unless there are some other mind control fetishes coming along then this ends with me.

SpoiltgoddessfanSpoiltgoddessfanabout 2 years ago

Wonderful. I'm excited to see where this goes. I love stories about rich dommes!

solepleasingsolepleasingover 2 years ago

This story is off to a good start. Can't wait to see how she becomes reluctantly addicted to her feet.

AlectaShadowAlectaShadowover 2 years agoAuthor

Hi folks! Very happy to read your fantastic comments, as usual.

@Anon: yes, I absolutely will continue! Chapter Two will be posted on Literotica at the beginning of December. I have so many story ideas I can't wait to share with you all - not limited to sapphic hypnosis either. You can take a look at my bio for more information about the genres I want to dabble in as I keep writing.

Looking forward to your thoughts on Ch.02!

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