All Comments on 'The Ticklish Trials of Taleena 001'

A good job, sir; I thought your story was well written.

I, ah, wow. Holy moly. All I've wanted in a story right here. This is exquisitely written, I love his disdain towards younger boys and how they wouldn't know what to do with her, and how stoic and unaffected he seems through all of this. Wonderfully done, I badly wish I could have been in her place.

I know, I know. It was she who was being tickle tortured but I couldn’t help but to imagine myself in such a predicament and I loved every second of it. When the LER wheeled around to those perfect soles - much like mine - I lost it!

Ticklishsoles

aka veryticklishsoles at the Y