All Comments on 'The Tides Of War Pt. 05.5'

by RobinLane

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Sid0604Sid0604about 9 years ago
What a Great Chapter...

This is a great chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It certainly adds to an already outstanding story and I look forward to reading much more. Easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing it with us.

tazz317tazz317about 9 years ago
WAR IS EXCITING TO READ ABOUT

for those participants not so much so. TK U MLJ LV NV

ag2507ag2507about 9 years ago
Don't mean to be a nudge

But 5.5 after 6? methinks you're counting the wrong fingers, lol

WILLACWILLACabout 9 years ago
If my memory of a prrior chapter

is correct they were married at the palace and the prince gave him a ring to give to her as her wedding ring ???

redlion75redlion75about 9 years ago

why the step backwards?we already had them on the way back to england didnt we?

dinkymacdinkymacabout 9 years ago
Excellent!!

Keep the chapters coming and thanks for sharing.

teedeedubteedeedubabout 9 years ago
Good

That bridged the gap. I knew something was missing. Plus, one of your best yet...

Thanks.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Thank you for the asked-for narrative. Ch. 5.5 was well worth the effort

Six, as it is, makes perfect sense with this solid foundation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Unfortunate interruption in story flow, but adds well to the previous and succeeding chapters.

Thanks for taking the time to fill in some missing events and issues. Later readers will appreciate the effort as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Thank you!

Thanks for bridging the gap with another great chapter. I'm looking forward to chapter 7.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Why didn’t they simply add the shaved magnesium to the explosive mortar shells?. It would have been very effective against their enemy

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