All Comments on 'The Tides Of War Pt. 13'

by RobinLane

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Sid0604Sid0604about 9 years ago
Another Great Chapter. ..

Thankyou for another great chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to reading more. Easily worth 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great writting.

Very gripping and natural.

tazz317tazz317about 9 years ago
REPARATIONS FOR AFTER-WAR

are just as cruel and difficult as the war itself. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Best chapter yet

Actually makes you think RobinLane was there in Africa with David.

xtremeddxtremeddabout 9 years ago
Wars and rumors of wars and the true cost of freedom, buried in the ground...

When David and Susan's children are all that is left, the next war to end all wars, WWII will be in Africa too.

The only thoughts and prayers as invasion plans of Japan were written... will this new Atomic bomb really go off? Will it end the war? 25,000 Allied servicemen KIA per hour in the initial landing of troops was shown in the planned invasion of Japan.

So few knew of the planned bombing of Japans mainland but... if it had not gone off, ended the war? You wouldn't have been born, wouldn't have lived to read this today.

Your only hope for the future as you drive your foreign car today? That people somehow remember a forgotten war and stop governments from annihilation, again.

Great story and writing Robin. Historic fiction or just a glimpse of truth, a time gone by.

Thanks for sharing your hard work with us on Lit.

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redlion75redlion75about 9 years ago

too bad mans greed from ww1 led directly to ww2.the disrespect shown to italy and japan hurt just as bad but you cant tell a politician anything.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A good chapter; thought it might end here. Interested where the plot goes next.

Great continuation of a great story. I do question the feasibility of fencing in African game animals. The nimble ones will jump over it, and the very large ones will walk right though it. But that is a minor point. Congratulations on keeping the plot interesting and logical, mostly. And thank you for making the lead actors people of character and virtue. Wouldn't this make a great movie?

arrowglassarrowglassabout 9 years ago
Another triumph!!!!!!!!

Just keeps on better and better!

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