by TitManDDo
This isn't part 1? Don't stop now, please, we need more of their story. Especially to see Shay tie herself up for Ben on purpose.
OMG! IM SO GLAD YOU ARE BACK!!! The wait was totally worth it! This was amazing!
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OMG! IM SO GLAD YOU ARE BACK!!! The wait was totally worth it! This was amazing! :D
I admit I hadn't been planning on a sequel, but Shay rose up and insisted on one; it's already in the hopper.
This was yummi just as your other story!
I'm looking forward to see the TitManDDo-Verse expand!
(Also, I'm wishing to read more about Rob Andrews)
Amazing story! What a perfect way to come back!
I jumped a little when I read that little cameo of my boy Rob! I just miss him si much :')
Keep the good work!
Too much talking during the sex scene, and too little description of action. It had potential, but didn't live up to it.
Great story! I just discovered you and this is the second story I have read. I'm impressed and added you to my fav list for future posts.
Cheers
SAGE
again, really good character development, a sound storyline, and hot meaningful sex!!
Nice premise.
Well told story.
But sex was much too automatic. Too fast starting and ending.
Needed more teasing.
Four stars.
Your grammar and spelling are good, so you must edit well. Your character development is lacking, as all of your characters are rather cliched and two dimensional, and your sex scenes tend to be formulaic and repetitive. Check out “The Novelist” and “Training” for some pretty well written sex scenes, and somewhat better character development.
Ugh. Ridiculous in just about every way. And all of this supposed romance and the author thought "well used hole" was a good idea. Nope. 1*.