by sunburycd
I can't find enough superlatives!
So incredibly hot! And so well written!
I'm also enjoying the little Easter eggs to your growing shared universe.
So good!
Your stories are alwYs fun and sexy to read. You can clearly add to this story if you want. But what a terrific read. I always look forward to your writings.
Acetylene "tanks" are constructed so that they vent but will not explode your story starts on an implausible premise
I'D GIVE YOU 10 STARS IF POSSIBLE. IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL STORY, REALLY! THANK YOU! I'VE GOT YOU IN MY FAVORITES NOW AND DON'T WORRY ABOUT THE ANON ACETYLENE TANK COMMENT, SOME PEOPLE, FOR THE LIFE OF THEM STILL HAVEN'T FIGURED OUT THAT THE STORIES ARE FANTASY / FICTION, WRITTEN FOR OUR ENJOYMENT. THANX
Who posted the acetylene comment heard of “poetic license”? Who cares? It’s still a great, erotic story!!
That person posted a fact, you threw a temper tantrum over it, and yet, somehow, THAT person's a moron?
When exposed to excess temperature, pressure, or mechanical shock, pure or less than pure acetylene gas can undergo a violent, explosive decomposition reaction. Additionally, if this reaction, or an ignition of acetylene occurs within the torch base or supply hose, it can propagate back into the storage cylinder causing it to explode violently.
A very good, erotic story. It needn't be exactly factual, being fiction. It was very hot and most males (and perhaps females too) I'm sure would enjoy it. I sure did! Please keep us posted on his progress. Chapter 2?
I'll defer to the experts on the likelihood of an explosion; here I was thinking the miraculous recovery of his sight would be the contentious issue! Anyway, thank you to those who enjoyed. Sorry vsloverbicd, no thought of a chapter two.
These are made up stories, for the most part. Why do a bunch of people think they are literary critics? Just enjoy the story, which was very good by the way, and if you want realism... go to the library.
She'll always have just the right treatment for whatever ails you! ;-)
The story works very well, so who cares what causes the temporary blindness. It's all about the loving Mom and her patient....
Thanks for another fun romp!
I loved this story. Very touching how a mother always knows what her child needs and is willing to meet th o we needs.
Really liked the story within the story. Could of cum 3 or 4 times in this one. You do mother and son incest really well.
but 5 stars yet again. I love your stories - always VERY sexy. and the pretext was straight forward - which works well in a shorter 1 chapter story. I thought the tease was fantastic. I'm looking forward to your next story!
I love the bit where she is shaving him and slowly impales herself on his cock as when she straddles him and then lowers herself it would naturally open her pussy lips for his penetration. Great read
I second the comment about his mom lowering herself into him while shaving him, that was an amazing but of writing. 5 stars.
An original idea on the injured incest story. Most have one person with broken arms or hands or even legs which is boring and really doesn't logistically work in the grand scheme of things but the blindness was original and added so many layers of erotic atmosphere to the story that made the story even better. I wish you would do maybe a 2 page sequel where the son forces the mom to wear a mask and she has to experience being "blind" for a few days allowing the son to tease and pleasure her, also would allow for an ending to the story. Just a suggestion
I've read almost everything you've written and have to say how much I appreciate how you develop your story line and the subsequent actions, especially between a mother and her son...if the truth be known, I have longtime fantasies about my own mother, sadly never realized, so I truly enjoy reading your stories. Keep up the great work.
... I loved the story. I felt that he should fake still being blind for a while to observe his mom and the things that she gets away with in front of her blind son. Same as when she stayed in the bathroom and watched him jack off . Great story.
This time it's the SONS eyes, sometimes,
it's MOMS hands, sometimes it's SISTERS
legs, even DAD gets two broken arms.
It all comes out the same ,somebody
gets fucked,sucked,and cunt lapped,etc.
THANKS
Sometimes it doesn't feel like a story, it feels like a scripture...
Outfuckingstanding! One of your best stories, so very well written and told. I think what made it flow so smoothly and quickly was the fact that the son could not see and therefore, was not hesitant to make love to his mom as she was also not hesitant in her actions to make love to him..............():\
What a hot story, although I do like some of the suggestions in the comments. I liked Blacknight's suggestion of him his blindness after return of his sight to 'see' what his mom had been doing, but maybe a better one was Joshua's suggestion of putting a blindfold on mom to let her experience it. Great writing. Keep it up (pardon the pun)! 5⭐
I loved every word except for "shithole" (if a girl said that to me during our anal escapades, it would be a real boner killer) and "boy cream".
I'll never understand why some commenters get so technical with incest porn stories. Did they come for the porn, or to find out how acetylene tanks work? For fucks sake.