All Comments on 'The Tiniest Bikini on the Beach'

I just threw up!!

Even though she eagerly accepted it i still say it was rape. This was not erotic at all.

Another one for the circular file. Just another one that needs to be rated in the minus category

You managed to include humongous twice within three small paragraphs but did utilize giant and large towards end of this half page story. So congrats?

If you can't get the basics of "category" right, what chance does the story have of being a decent read? This was just stupid. In the middle of a crowded beach you want us to believe NO ONE helps her? And you want us to believe that when Mr. Humongous sticks his dick in her mouth she doesn't bite his dick off? Horrible story line, thoroughly unlikable characters add up to a disgusting story.

No stars as even giving this garbage one star would be an insult to the star.

Nice idea, but the execution could have been better. Far too fast, so over too quick. Lots of scope for some hot action, but all felt a bit rushed. Hence only 3 stars from me.

So this story is about someone being raped because they dare to wear a skimpy swimsuit to the beach, sorry that is disgusting. ZERO points for this.

An executive of a business is not going to parade around the beach in that bathing suit.

A bathing suit company would set up a show tent with many models and products. Not hire just one model.

No one sees the rape and helps but those that see it

, including husband join in?

There are many stories “like” this where wife substitutes last minute (dancer at bachelor party, waitress, escort for visiting client) and done well they can be hot. All depends on the characters like is husband aware of what happens? Is he a cuck? In the dark? Angry? RAAC or divorce or Btb?

This could have gone so many ways but died at the begging.

I did try to write once but my submission was rejected. Pisses me off even more now.

Sorry, not much fun at all.

So rape is fun for everyone

A woman who wears a sexy bikini deserves to be gang-raped in public? And, her husband should join in and encourage the rapists?

KB

One e of my stories has a lower score than this

KB.

When you got to the end you should have highlighted the entire text and clicked delete.

Pile of crap

The second one in less than a week! The last one was moved to the Non-consent section. Doesn't this one belong there, too? Please.

Unbelievable.

While this might not be the most trite submission on this site, it's certainly in the bottom five.

If it were possible, I'd have given it minus stars.

...are all you people crying about 'rape?' It seems to me, she almost invited the men to use her sexually, and when they did, she did not rebuff them at all, almost, if not exactly because she enjoyed the sexual attention she received from the crowd of men. And do NOT tell me there were no women on the beach to call for help for her if they so desired, unless THEY also enjoyed the show she put on for them, or unless they felt she got her cumuppance, or maybe they were all just jealous.

Rape seems to be included more often recently in LW stories. Give them the scores they deserve.