All Comments on 'The Tomboy'

An OK kind of story. But, what started as a rating of 5, “Now I filled my hand with the curve of her ass. "Where's Molly?" I asked as Sam rolled to her back and opened her legs. My daughter DOES NOT SHAVE, BARELY TRIMS, and I love it. My fingers explored her PUBIC FOREST,” and a 5 because she actually looked like a woman. Suddenly took a dive to a rating of 4 because, “As I drove, I looked at my daughter. All the piercings were gone (a very good and excellent choice) but you could still see the holes” (just plain dam NASTY, and that entire statement could have been left out of your story. Completely! I wonder how other readers will rate “THE HOLES” aspect of your Read? Oh, I meant to say, your story?)

This story is screaming for a Chapter 2. Loved it. 5 stars.

Hot like hel. I cum 5 times. I wish I was Jim. This is one of the best stories I ever read ( or maybe it was real ? I will never know). Please keep it up and write more. 100 start from me. I wish I have a gf/wife that like to role-play this story with me.

Very hot

How to ruin a good story anal does that

Fun story. Thanks

when is Part II? Rarely do I find stories on here entertaining.. This was well written.

More, please.

That was awesome!

Wish you hadn't cut the ending so short, otherwise great story.

Not bad, although I feel like the story lost momentum and felt more detached once you add in the extra partners, especially when it randomly started changing points of view.

I’m not into letting other people sleep with your missus so maybe that’s just my own bias turning me off towards the end there though.

Lost interest when you described Chewbacca as hot. Hilary women are not hot and neither is your crappy story.

Sorry,, but you lost me when "...I want your baby." reared it's ugly head. Not my bag . . . .