All Comments on 'The Tool Shed'

I enjoyed the story, but it took a lot of concentration to read it. Sometimes I had to backtrack a few times to understand it. A few more commas would make it much easier to understand. You also switched between 'him' and 'you' repeatedly which made it even more difficult. A read through of some of the 'hints and tips' could have eliminated some of these problems, they are really helpful. Apart from the grammar I liked the story itself.

You NEVER leave someone bound for any length of time. Too many things can go wrong. Bad story.

great story line, it got my motor running! but could be much easier to read with improved grammar and consistant tense.