All Comments on 'The Torch Singer Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Atta girl!

Another spell binding chapter of a wonderfully written & mesmerizing story.

Hope there are several more lengthy chapters to this story.

Lonely_readerLonely_readerover 7 years ago
Very good but...

I don't know, jake's "dark god" sexual aura seems a little bit off... I mean, he's already handsome, successful, smart and she's totally in love with him and had been for all her adult life, adding the 50 shades thing makes it a little bit unreal.

Otherwise really liked it, can't wait to read more.

WordsWordsWordsWordsWordsWordsover 7 years ago

Thank you for not drawing out the discovery that the letter had never been delivered. Looking forward to the next installment!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 7 years ago
Noooo! I need more! Immediately!

Loving the story.

FantaghiroFantaghiroover 7 years ago
Loving it ....

... and can't wait for the next chapter.

maddictmaddictover 7 years ago
Very nice

Lovely, your a naughty girl. Your warming my cool So. cali night. Anyone else think their elevator is going through the roof. Your nod to MadMen warms my heart.

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