All Comments on 'The Tourist'

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warelliswarellisalmost 4 years ago
Angels!

Very nice~. I imagine you borrowed from Monster Girl Quest for this angel? :D

What goddess is Illyrias?

hellenberghellenbergalmost 4 years ago
Already rated but had to drop a comment too

When I first read this I was struck by your take on "angels" (and the scenario was all the better for Garend getting his comeuppance) but the second time running through I find I am also enthused about the pine dryads at the very end. "Rustling leaves and pine needles" sound like fun -- and it raises more interesting possibilities about the setting. (Don't think I've not noticed the reappearance of the cambion South, either!)

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