All Comments on 'The Tournament'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice, if a bit mixed up

1: "May I have thou scarf"

I think it should be "May I have thy scarf?"

2. "Can thou say the same?"

More properly: "Canst thou say the same?"

Or: "Can thee say the same?"

But I enjoyed it.

Frankly, i think it should be longer; 'a right good tale' as it were. I think the Mayor might have made a bigger job in keeping the villain from the Good Guy.

73

HP

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Knights of the Round Table this ain't.

King Arthur is undoubtedly rolling over in his grave.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Lovely story, thank you!

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