All Comments on 'The Tow Service Pt. 01'

Nice start to the story. Please keep going!

I loved it and yes i have been in somewhat the same situation only i lost my room key to my motel room. I had to go to the desk in the lobby late in the early morning hours and a very wonderful gal was working and just smiled and said this had happened before and asked if people like me lost there keys on purpose? I assured her that i didn't and really didn't want to present myself to the motel as a woman as i had stayed there before several times. She was a sweet heart and said my secret was safe with her. This did not stop me as i continued to dress and stayed at the same motel many times, i just made sure when i checked in i got two keys and always left one in my car from that day on. your story is well written and i am waiting for the 2nd part, thank you, Diane

Wow so very beautiful and well written!!! I can’t wait for part two!!!

Yes,I loved it. I can’t wait to read the continuation. Very well written and I can completely relate and immerse myself. I find it very intriguing and always love “from the first person view”. Perhaps like your other previous stories, you could apply more detail in the transformation process leading up to your excursions into the outside world. I myself truly enjoy the art of transforming into my feminine alter ego from head to toe. For me it’s two-thirds of the pleasure. After that “she” creates her own dialogue.. Hugs

As sweet as this story is, you need to dial back on the prothetic conversations. Nobody speaks like that in real life.

"it must be an exhilarating liberation--one that allows you to escape societal constraints and embrace your authentic identity."

"In those moonlit hours, when society slumbers and inhibitions fade away, I find solace in embracing my true self. The world becomes a canvas upon which I can paint my desires and dreams."

when was the last time you met someone on the street and had multiple lines like that in one conversation?

Loved this story. Hope we get chapter #2 and beyond.

Thank you all for reading my stories.

I just finished and submitted part 2 of this one here.

I will be online very soon.

Regarding the comment about applying more detail to the transformation process:

It gave me an idea for a new story. Let's see what I will come up with.

And regarding the comment about dialing back on the prothetic? conversation:

The first sentence was maybe a bit over the top. I wanted Robert to impress Amanda.

The second sentence was a typo. It was what Amanda thought, not what she said.

I write often at night, and even if I proof-read it 5 times, some mistakes stay hidden from my tired eyes.

Enjoyed your story

I felt Amanda’s thrill and fear of walking alone with the shadows. My trips out dressed have been much the same

Eager to read the next chapter.

What an exciting yet delicately moving story of the fears and feelings that all we crossdressers experience.

We dress up thinking that we're just going for a walk in public then we are forced to interact with others, and that can be scary but exhilarating.

I appreciate the time and trouble you took to avoid grammar and spelling mistakes which ruin so many stories by other writers.

Thank you very much; I look forward to seeing what happens when Amanda meets Robert tomorrow.

OXO Rosemary

Wow,Natalia! That was not what I expected. You sound like an incredible woman, definitely ahead of where I am. One day, I hope to find my Robert. It's getting late.