All Comments on 'The Tow Service Pt. 02'

Beautiful.

Thank you!

Kisses Stef

Awesome !

So beautiful! one of the best stories I've read. You captured our dreams and experiences wonderfully!

Would you love being in Amanda's shoes?

Yes, LOL and her whole outfit and in that car too.

Did you expect such a turn of events?

I thought you might drag it out for one more story. But it's still good.

A little of the language is very flowery with big words. I don't mind exactly because it sort of sets up the characters. But watch the constant repetition of certain phrases.

What do you think will happen next?

I'm not sure. I would like to see their relationship continue out into the rest of "real life". There's a lot of directions you could go with it. I think it's good work.

Looking forward to Rebecca’s “I told you so” when hearing what happened.

Well written! Very romantic. Wonderful balance between internal monologue and progressive intimacies. Thank you.

Mmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmm so very beautiful and so very sensuous!!!

Love the story,let me relive my real life adventure one nite late summer at the drive in threater

You have brought forth an interesting subject Nathalie. Can a mtf crossdresser truly believe that they aren’t in any way attracted to men? Maybe. But subconsciously, such an individual would obviously want to be an object of a man’s sexual desires IHMO, so this story was at the very least, thought provoking.

But how can Amanda have a closet full of female attire and yet this girlfriend you have alluded to apparently doesn’t know anything about it’s existence? Hmmmm…That could be the subject of a whole other story!

Oh this is so good…very romantic but very hot at the same time… Love that Robert squeezed her penis, definitely a nice and special addition… Would love to see them simply get married…what’s going on for both of them may require that…also a simultaneously romantic and hot thought..

JT

Your command of the language is admirable, but I'm afraid you're getting a little "showy" with it, which detracts from the realism of the storyline. Perhaps you could use the more eloquent language in some erotic poetry, where it would serve to enhance the piece?

Gorgeous story, nonetheless. i am totally in love with both of the protagonists and hope to see another installment in which their relationship becomes permanent, not necessarily excluding the girlfriend.

You are very talented and I wish you great success X