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All Comments on 'The Town of Umbolo: Coming of Age'

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fred0650fred0650almost 3 years ago

Another enticing story about the magic town of Umbolo. Let us hope that Nicole and her father produce many siblings together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wonderful story marred only by a few sex reversals ( she felt her hands on her back) and the addition of excess words. A cautious edit, perhaps reading aloud, might catch these.

Quite an enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Shit!That was the best sex story ever! Thanks!

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Just dipping my toe into writing erotica, so of it's a bit rough around the edges I apologize. My stories so far: The Town of Umbolo (a series of vignettes): Tales from a town where Familial Love is accepted and encouraged. Going Dancing: An over-the-top satire about an ext...