All Comments on 'The Toy'

Please write more. This was a good story. The toy doesn't come off as a victim, but a willing partner.

But I actually liked this one! 5 stars.

Whether you meant to or not, I disliked the male character a lot. I take this as a sign that you have a talent, because if I had no emotional response to your characters what-so-ever, then you didn't do your job as a writer...I was drawn into the story, and barely noticed the few mechanical errors to the piece. A little editing and this story would be perfect.

I really liked the concept of this story. Too bad there aren't more chapters. He could really have some fun, first by having her describe how she felt doing the mall adventure then giving her other tasks.

I thought for sure this would be the first story in a series....😪.

Any consideration to continuing this encounter?