All Comments on 'The Trade'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice

Very nice. Sure hope you add more. Daughters lezzing. Dads swapping back. Bringing in other girls. Many possibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow, different directions then I thought

Well written 5 stars.

Of course Mr. Kingsley introduces Abagail

to Brenda for girl on girl, father daughter

then of course adds Joe in to the party

for Abagail Joe father daughter.

Thanks for writing look forward to part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story

Please write the next part soon

KMSBHFKMSBHFabout 4 years ago
Best 5 stars I've ever given

I need more of this, shes the perfect girl to write in my opinion

CarlisleCarlisleabout 4 years ago

Great start. Looking forward to part 2.

Crusader235Crusader235about 4 years ago
Like

I really like this story, and another chapter or two, to tell us about the hot weather girl becoming the Boss' whore. We would really like to hear how Daddy Fucked the Boss' daughter. Thanks for this one!

Snick6977Snick6977over 3 years ago
More please

Very enjoyable story. I love the woman’s attitude as well as the straightforwardness of the rich guy. The idea of a personal courtesan is highly erotic to me.

KMSBHFKMSBHFover 3 years ago
I need more of this

Nuff said

luvs2watchu2luvs2watchu2over 3 years ago

Great story. Loved all of the characters. I think 3 or 4 more chapters would be about right.

JGnCTJGnCTabout 1 year ago

Nice, but where's the follow up? There's got to be one. What did the Father do when he got those pictures? Didn't the boyfriend question her about the free ride an paid expenses at the strip club. Did Abigail ever meet the other Daughter? So many unanswered questions.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Story started great. But way to short and not finished. Whole night left out!!!!!!!!!!!!

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