All Comments on 'The Trail West Ch. 06'

The thing is that there is no complexity. The good people are wonderful and the bad people horrible, and right alway triumph. Well Written.

This is one of the best Western I have read on this site, a bit of romance & a good story line

This is one grest.I can hardley wait for each new chapter,THANK YOU!

As I said before, Zane Grey eat your heart out. Looking for the next chapter with enthusiasm.

Woodmanone, Thank you for sharing this story with us. It is well written, and has me awaiting each new chapter. It deserves a 10.

You would have to turn it into a novel if you made the characters deep and complex. Nice piece of work.

You are turning into quite a Storyteller my friend.

With Very High Regard

Good story waiting for more Would read it as a novel.

Great series.. can't wait for the next installment !!

This well crafted tale is even better this time than I remember it being the first time I enjoyed it. I read ALL of your stories more than once. If you had a bit better proofreaders, the stories would read easer.

Regardless, you create some of the best stories.

Thank You,

de Jay

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

You've practiced enuff...start doing eBooks on Amazon and Barnes &Noble pays more.

It's very entertaining.

just wish a little more attention had been given by the proof reader.

I shore like your pen scratching, Mister. Lol

I 'spect he won't either.

Excellent story!

This moves along at a fair pace and the plot doesn’t get too involved (yet), what does irritate me is that for all Josh’s worrying and thoughts about home and his family, he hasn’t sent any letters or wires, I’m hoping that’ll be rectified soon. I know this is a long dead story, but for the sake of anyone reading this as research for how to write - continuity is huge, it’s usual for writers to be “in the moment” and concentrate on the piece of plot they’re working on, whereas we the readers will normally be reading stories in series in a much shorter time frame than the author took, the continuity errors leap off the page to us, which is generally why proof readers and editors help avoid glitches like that. That all said, I’m enjoying this immensely, so thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.