All Comments on 'The Train Ride'

I have to admit, I usually don't read stories in this section, because they don't really do anything for me, but this one caught my eye. It's a good story! A little choppy on the sentences,(kind of like my notes) but well-written. This one made me wetter than I've ever gotten when reading a story. Good job!! Keep up the good work!!!

omg... i love this... i think next time i'm on a train this will become a great role play .... hot hot hot... i'm dripping wet as i type this...

K

This was totally to-die-for! LOVED IT!!!

Loved your story!