All Comments on 'The Transformation Ch. 05'

Highly intriguing. Nicely done!

Not quite sure how I feel about Alex cheating on her girlfriend with her ex.

She's not Quite cheating, because they have a more open relationship. But yeah, Alex's self control has a lot left to be desired. Course now we get the fun part in 6. Does she try to help her drunk/ sleeping friend back 'home' or does she wait it out in the hotel, possibly for days while her girlfriend worries about her. And THEN have to get a not-quite-human-anymore ex across the border.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter... so far so awesome... keep up the great work...

when is the next chapter coming out?

What more can I say, really? This is one of the hottest transformation stories I've read so far, and it only got 6 of the supposed 15 chapters it was supposed to have available. I'd even buy the ebook if one had existed.

Oh well... Yet another abandoned story on Lit. :(

Just read through all the chapters to date. Wonderful story. Likable characters and decent world building. Shame it never continued.