All Comments on 'The Transformation of Betty B01'

cuck shit.

For a lousy story and no score

This happened within the original timeline of the story, yes? And before chapter 14 and takes into account what's written by the wife in the last paragraph of chapter 16, right? There the wife claims that the husband has never become a cuckold after 30+ years of marriage. Am I to assume that the marriage has ended?

Now, the husband doesn't identify as a cuckold but in this last page, the wife confesses that she only stayed with the husband because her Master didn't want her to leave the husband and that the husband became an after-thought. She also claims that he's a "Master" but not a good one and that he's just a place holder. If that doesn't scream "second-best" and cuckold, I don't know what it does. In fact, it makes the husband an "alpha in his own world", ie, a fool who thinks he's a Domme. A cuckold is still a cuckold when he's the one to decide to share his wife and with whom she shares them with. There's different types of cucks as one size doesn't fit all. On this chapter, the husband clearly showed to be a cuck not a Domme.

Why, Mr. Author, why are you sabotaging your own work? The saga read as one as where it was possible for a wife to enjoy a D/s relationship with a third while respecting her husband and don't seeing and treating him like a wimp. It was the first story I've read of the kind. But now, you decided to tell your readers what most suspected all along: that deep down, she didn't rate her husband as highly as the lover and that in fact she's looking for a new one. If I was her husband learning that fact, I divorce her on the spot as she simply wasn't worth investing into anymore. A 30+ year marriage where you are a place-holder is not good enough. It's quite different from the image you're trying to show before in the main series. I am not rating this one, I am too dismayed for that. In light of the new additions, I would have to rate the entire saga quite differently than I would without them. I felt I was trolled all along and just begun this saga yesterday! I guess this saves me the trouble of reading the rest.

What a shame.

Unintelligible that people out there at the world that idiotic and pathetic!! Whats going on at their brains?? Stop pestering normal reader who want read exciting and erotic stories not like your shit!!!

another cocksucking wimp posting dumb cuck SHIT.

But can't these stories at least make sense? Even for a fictional/fantasy story this was absolutely disgusting.

The author did a very poor job on this story. It seems the author has some gay issues mixed with some cuckold issues that were transported to this bad story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, low context, shallow, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

enjoyed this new story and all the other new chapters you have added. hope to read more

I really enjoyed this whole series. Thanks for sharing it.

Love to read more if you've got it.

Writing about a whore, and some fool she calls master again. Does that make her a masterpeice??

Earlier the husband took her out of town to prevent their neighbors, friends people at the husbands job (and I assume relatives) from knowing she is a slut/whore. Now you are telling us differently. I truly dislike when authors don't keep their facts straight!

Otherwise I am enjoying the sexual descriptions very much and up to this point I have rated each chapter with 4 or 5 stars. Except for a few typos, and keeping your facts straight I think this has been well written.

One more Dum_U_Softly epic.