All Comments on 'The Travel Agent'

I didn't get all the way through this.

Please learn the difference between 'loose' and 'lose'.

Also 'peak' and 'peek'

Damn this was long...would've been nicer broken up into "chapters"

A great story. I seems you put a lot of effort into it. You did not limit yourself to describing the sex scenes.

No, you described the setting and the people involved in a way that makes it easy to imagine them.

Thanks!