All Comments on 'The Treasure of the Amazon'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy11 months ago

Different but enjoyable!

5

Ravey19Ravey1911 months ago

Nice little romp, good story but a little short for my liking. However I do love your stories nd read them ASAP.

Stargazer5154Stargazer515411 months ago

Awesome story, thanks 👍

A_BierceA_Bierce11 months ago

Highest highest pahaise, Ahonde.

PrfsrPrfsr11 months ago

This is a case study in anthropology, not archaeology. To me, not as enjoyable as your earlier works.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I can't get over the wide range of stories you post eg from cowboys, cops, soldiers, and now Indiana Jones. All of your stories are very enjoyable reads and are a pleasant discovery each time they show up. Thank you.

Sailboater1960Sailboater196011 months ago

I enjoyed your story very much. The fact/fiction is always a possibly and brings so many unanswered questions that the so called experts always brush off

linnearlinnear11 months ago

Very nicely written and the way you switch topics is amazing.

Comentarista82Comentarista8211 months ago

Interesting idea for you to make this guy a more common-man Indiana Jones, but posit the tribe he found to be probably be the original Amazons, which was always the original legend once Spaniards started sailing to find the New World.

You constructed Iana's speech to be so charming, and it was a nice touch to make her so intelligent. Robert treated her gently and loved her mightily. I really enjoyed this, and it kept the flavor of your other best works. 5

mariabordelonmariabordelon11 months ago

very interesting but the big blond goddess ignores the reality of women of all sizes and intermarriage over years

otherwise heartwarming and worthy of 5 stars

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc11 months ago

Beautiful story, especially the revelation at the end when he realizes he found a treasure in the Amazon greater than what he was searching for. 5.0*!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

To be a fantasy nerd by heart i enjoyed it at great 5+

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I assume you're talking about Colonel Fawcett but you've changed the name slightly. His was an interesting tale, and there were several different versions of what became of him in South America. Great Story.

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Women tend to be the central characters in my stories, because I find their complex personalities to be fascinating. My stories come from my life experiences or the thoughts inspired by people I have met. I am an avid fan of history and especially the history of the America...