All Comments on 'The Trick or Treat Booth'

by CarlUrvile

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roseyfingersroseyfingersover 4 years ago
Good story but

not clear how she ate or performed other functions for six months. I guess fantasy does not have to deal with such issues.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Loved it!! Interesting story and well written!!

LiveLoveAsAlwaysLiveLoveAsAlwaysover 4 years ago
Satisfying Short Story

Even though the story was short, I found it satisfying. More please.

ronitjosephronitjosephover 4 years ago
Ronit

Very good story with appropriate ideas and words.

But it should be in some more part.

Keep writing .

TreaclelipzTreaclelipzover 4 years ago
Loved it thank you sir

I really enjoyed this tale,I hope for more parts to it in future...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting setup but this should be in reluctant / nonconsent.

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