All Comments on 'The Trip'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
could it be true?

Could it be true? Writer seems to know well what women dream about and what turns men on. Oh, yes, the agony, the love, the misery and the loving couplings to console each other. The pleasure of climaxing inside mom without fear of getting her pregnant because she is already.

michel92439michel92439over 7 years ago
longing

I like this style of story telling, it brings reader close to what happens between the two without being vulgar. This story is not really about incest it is a love story in a modern setting. Would love to read a follow up to the last words: "could it be true...."

What is she thinking, is she worried or just excited? Will she let him in on her secret? Plenty of ways to continue on this theme.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Anonymous

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
love story?

NOPE, sonny just wanted a fuck

racfguyracfguyover 2 years ago
Just because she was his mother did not mean she should shelter him from the world.

She's done a pretty good job sheltering him already.

******

So, he's knocked her up.

Fast forward nine months, she gives birth to a daughter.

******

Fast forward 19 or 20 years. Pat's fucking his daughter/sister. LOL

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