All Comments on 'The Trip'

Blah! I didn't feel much for any character. Clumsy presentation. Most writing has a tension and conflict and I didn't get either with this. I will change my opinion when the subsequent section appear. Keep writing!!! We all learn by trial and error. Hugs! You know who I am :)

This is a very wonderful story out of love. I do understand how she feel when taking the flight to meet her Mistress, i can feel that she wish the plane can bring to her Mistress faster, on the other hand, she also wish it can be slower in the way, especially thinking of the special task she has to fulfill. I really love this wonderful story.

"When do i begin to tell the story of how great a love can be ..."

Very nice lovely story, i cant wait to read "To be continued."

A nice balance between enticing the reader to look forward to more of the story and an adventure along the way.