All Comments on 'The Trip Ch. 01'

It was starting to get good, but you ruined it by bringing in another girl into the picture. Then I didn't even bother to continue.

Incredible start. Keep on writing,I need to know where this goodie goes.

Dang but this certainly sounds like a dom taking care of his sub(s) and certainly going in an agreed upon direction and actions. NOT.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Well you sure cured me of wanting to read any other chapters of this story. Not even going to talk about all the shit you brought up in this chapter.