All Comments on 'The Trip Home'

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(But not long enough for a person to get off!)

I would like to read more stories about young men and older women. I liked it,because I could still see something like this happening.

Watch out for spelling mistakes for eg :- Plane - Plain. It was a very good story. Just that little complaint.

please be more careful with your editing. And keep writing!

my cock was up and hard, my hand was going and it ended just before i came. So i read the last part again and boy did I come..

Sorry guys, I'll do some stricter editing in the future. And maybe extend the sex scenes a little :P

Very nice but way to short - I'm now waiting for part 2.

Just the kind of naughty mature woman that every young man dreams about. Can't wait for the next chapter!