by MemberX
April Fools like us all are wary of gift horses. FOR THE AUTHOR: WRITING SHOULD BE FOR YOURSELF 1ST, IF DOING FOR PROFIT THEN WHAT EVER IT TAKES. TK U MLJ LV NV
Loved your story, LOVED the alternate ending. I like to see people stand up and give a big "F You" to the anonymous trolls, critics and keyboard warriors. You did it spectacularly, and made it hot as fuck. Bravo.
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Really had me going there, I thought you were changing genres. Lol
I actually enjoyed both endings, not as much as Jamie but... .
Why can't I ever get in these situations? Actually I wonder if it ever happens except in fictional sex stories.