by MemberX
would've liked the story to go on a bit longer. the way you ended this chapter makes me think your ending this series. which sucks because its a great one. keep up the good work tho. i'm sure your new stories will be just as great.
I don't get it. If you didn't like the previous chapter, why did you read this one at all? Just to piss on somebody else's work?
I like the series so far but I do agree it could have been longer. The dynamic between the three is compelling but the end does leave you wondering. I don't believe that she would have knocked amys lights out as it was put but I think you could have expanded on ellies frame of mind. Good story though.
it usually ain't and be leery of pipe dreams to cum. TK U MLJ LV NV
need to continue from where this chapter left off and not do the time skip like you did.