All Comments on 'The Trophy Wife Ch. 03'

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werewolfguy84werewolfguy84over 12 years ago
nice, but...

would've liked the story to go on a bit longer. the way you ended this chapter makes me think your ending this series. which sucks because its a great one. keep up the good work tho. i'm sure your new stories will be just as great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Anonymous, when you write your story, it'll end differently

I don't get it. If you didn't like the previous chapter, why did you read this one at all? Just to piss on somebody else's work?

alliekat1979alliekat1979over 12 years ago
interesting

I like the series so far but I do agree it could have been longer. The dynamic between the three is compelling but the end does leave you wondering. I don't believe that she would have knocked amys lights out as it was put but I think you could have expanded on ellies frame of mind. Good story though.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
WHEN ALL IS NOT LIKE IT SEEMS

it usually ain't and be leery of pipe dreams to cum. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Gotta Luv It when a Plan Cums Together

:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

need to continue from where this chapter left off and not do the time skip like you did.

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