All Comments on 'The Trouble With Mom'

Oops!!

You should check your work before publishing, this shows the story twice !!!!!

The wind out of one's sails...

All was progressing well, until the poor editing and repeat text ruined it.

Duplicated

Story repeats, good lead though, add Mom band Gloria together next.

All you get is ***. A little fast paced but a nice story. Did you write it for the older crowd who forget too easily? Copying and pasting it at the end to make it longer doesn’t work. If your are going to make it a short one pager then do that. Don’t extend it by copying and pasting.

Oops, you pasted double.

A small typo or two.

Overall, pretty hot.

Not a bad story but, the story repeated itself. Page 2 is the same as page 1. Thanks for your time and imagination.

A good story but I really didn't need to read it twice in the same chapter. So when are Gloria and you and Mom going to hook up?

A pity. Sorry we didn't get to learn about Gloria's anal.

Great story, but duplicated in the post.

I always liked dating older women. I could it dispensed with the “dating dance.” Would she or wouldn’t she?

When the answer was, yes, we had a great date and enjoyed the additional desert.

When the answer was, no, we had a great date and went our separate ways after the evening. That didn’t preclude additional dates, it just meant we didn’t have to play games on that one.

A good story was ruined by a total lack of editing and dumb mistakes.

Good story. Now write more and pick up where u left off. Please finish the story with his mom.

........totally spoiled it. It was going okay until then.

I didn't realize it copied twice and I checked. I am surprised that 'Lit" let it go through that way instead of sending it back.

The writer has the skill of William Shakespeare!

Great story thank you I loved it. I too have always enjoyed the charms of older women. Good to see a returning author and hopefully you will keep writing your wonderful stories for us. I cannot understand the mentality of the anon commenters. Goodness this is a fantasy world not the real life thing.

But then you losted me, why a 10" cock ??.

For me that kills it. Good to a point.

..THANK ???

USAF

Proofread

Hey, this is Richmond2247.

LOVE your work. This story absolutely rocks me. The dialogue is spot on. I believe that I know the characters. This is deeply believable.

As for the others comments, ignore the ones who consume erotica but do not produce it. As for the anonymous ones, they do not even count.

I thinkk you should pay more attention so you don't copy future writings over like this one.

Well, it is good you wrote in your mother as one of your Ladies you licked. I have felt older women do not recieve love the way younger women do.