All Comments on 'The Trouble with Roommates Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Awesome story....i wish my roommate will do this to me

Please write few more parts and if you can please add husband wife kind of stuff

And detail transformation to crossdresser of nick.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
great start

Well written and almost believable as a scenario. I especially like that Nick only has himself to blame for his predicament.

JD2100JD2100about 9 years ago
loved it

please continue and i second the previous comment. wud luv for this to happen to me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
love it!

I love where this is going...I have put it in "my favorites"...please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Hahahaha

This is great! Not normally into the crossdressing stuff but the way his roommate is taking over is so hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
great stuff

would love my roommate Scott to do this with me... hurry up with the next instalment. would be fantastic if you were to write a story with me (Ross) and Scott in it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Why do I so strongly suspect...

Nick's rectal cavity will be undergoing some changes soon.

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggabout 9 years ago
Great!

Just my kind of story! Even though there is no emotion on Brian's part yet, I think Nick is in a very romantic situation , even though he doesn't know it himself. He will just love being a gurl and he will realize that he is much happier once Brian gives him what he needs!

For a first story, you should have a major hit here! 5 stars.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 9 years ago
you have my attention!

Looking forward to where this may be going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
can't wait for next chapter

omg i can't wait for you to finish this one!!

kamperman45kamperman45about 9 years ago
Oh Wow, this is so good!

Want to continue reading this and see where it is going (and I hope it will be where I am wanting to see it go). Yummy plot! Love your wicked, devious, scheming mind - it reminds me of....well, Me! ;o)

MuskratSamMuskratSamabout 9 years ago
Love the slow build...

I'm sure this is going to be hot.

northboy1uknorthboy1ukabout 9 years ago
Excellent

Excellent read

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

all my roommate got me to do was suck his dick and eventually turn into his fuck partner

Adrian18255Adrian182556 months ago

Omg I loved this, great build up can't wait to read more

4Leather4Leather4 months ago

Control is a mighty thing. Love it

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