All Comments on 'The Truth About Sarah'

by Equinox31

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

nice would to hear more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
crap

total crap

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Fetish

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice job

Loved it every time Sarah verbally taunted Tom. That's my favorite thing in these kinds of stories. Will be on the lookout for your next effort.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
HOT!

Not sure what these other voters are looking for. This was HOT! More please!

clearlakequeenclearlakequeenalmost 12 years ago
Liked It!

Some of us men enjoy being the beta male and like Tom, know that their little dicks will not cut it a long term relationship without letting the women enjoy a real fucking when she wants it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
nice

really good story, very hot...continue it

Equinox31Equinox31almost 12 years agoAuthor
Appreciate it

I appreciate the positive comments, im working on a pt.2 and for those who left negative comments, either find a diff story or atleast give some constructive criticism

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice but...

While I did enjoy your story, I'm sorry to say there were a few typos and other errors such as misspelling or even incomplete sentences. If I were you I'd go back and re-read it to find them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Putting aside the fact that I'm unnaturally turned-off by oral, I love the way you explored a perfectly healthy albeit unorthodox sexual preference. The best part about this story is that these three people can continue living this way perfectly content with each other and themselves in a nonzero-sum relationship!

AfoojaAfoojaalmost 12 years ago
Big charge out of this

This is one of those really hot cuckold stories that just begs for sequels. With the hot roommate plus and endless supply of superstuds on a college campus, Tom might never be able to have sex with Sarah again. But he'd enjoy that as much as we would.

Glad you are going to do more with this.

rkxtrkxtalmost 12 years ago
Excellent

This genre of erotic story is my favorite, and your story was excellent. Often its the 'normal' couple, with the chaste/good girl blossoming into a cock hungry size queen.

I however enjoyed this more, the cheating cock slut gf n the bf who discovers he cant get enough of watching & hearing her fuck & taunt. The dom stud was well done as well. Please continue this story line & thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Time to go

Pretty sure a normal guy wouldn't put up with her being a cheating slut. And who knows what she might pass along to him. Yes, it's fiction, but there has to be a kernel of believability in it.

devilspy2001devilspy2001over 10 years ago
Normal guys?

LOL, no the cuckold is not "normal", what ever that means. Oh I see, normal as in just like you. Yes troll that is it. Everyone has to live by your rules and be just like you. As for the story, it was ok. Her cuckold is now hooked on real man seed. It will not be long before cuckold learns a few new tasks. Like sucking cock, guiding real man meat into her pussy and fine tight ass. He will also start cleaning cock after the stud unloads in her, or on her. For now, she will allow him to eat all the cum out of her and off her. Even let him flop around in her stretched out pussy for a couple of years. But only once a month. In time he will marry her and she will put him in chastity and control his cuckold peenie and if and when he gets to have an orgasm. And his boxers he wears, will be gone. Replaced with panties. And cuckold will love it. Just what he has been looking for.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Not a man

Tom may have XY chromosomes but he's not a man. Not even sure of his species. No spine. Subhuman brain. Maybe high functioning slime.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
fuck Tommy and fuck dear annony!!! The story rocked

lots of masturbation and thank you for the effort. gave you a 5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Yuk!

This may be the worst story I've ever read on this site. No nothing, no connection to reality. About all I can't criticize is the spelling and grammar, and that's faint praise.

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2almost 9 years ago
One of the best stories on here and Iknow dear annony loves it

he only comments on those stories he likes, I know he tells us he hates them but deep inside his sad little body ne loves them. His wife told me he did!!

Tcs1956Tcs1956almost 9 years ago
Nothing hotter...

...than being with a REAL woman! Like the guy here, my dock is so tiny that no real woman would ever settle for just this little bit of dick. A woman who really loves her husband will always let him watch and participate in her being pleasured. And cleaning her up is how I show my appreciation for her letting me watch. Cleaning them both is the ultimate! Truly a loving wife!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow HOT

OMFG...I'd love to be Tom and eat her cock cum filled pussy!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Iv always known my then gf now wife had a reputation for being a hot thing and after a few drinks would climb onto the nearest cock available. She never shyed away from telling me some of the horny sex she had and admit it turned me on and we ended up doing the things she told me about like fucking in risky places and places we could easily be seen. She was always horny and after a few drinks didnt care who was around she just needed cock. One story was when a guy was fucking her in a park on her way home after a club she noticed a guy nearby watching and seen him take his cock out and play she told the guy fucking her and he said he probably wants to fuck you as well she said ok let him and waved him over. She ended up being fucked by one and sucking the other with them swapping round and both ended up flooding her cocksocket with spunk. I found this so horny and told her id be ok doing that if she ever wanted it again and she smiled and replied id love that. Well after a few nightime visits to the same park hoping for a repeat nothing doing. I told her laughing after we got dressed you would probably have more luck being here on your own to which she replied probably could if you want me to laughing. I said do you want me to go hide in the bushes behind you then and see what happens to which she said i dare you then so i did and waited for ages naybe 20 mins when a guy walked in the direction we were i looked at her and seen her legs drift open a little and thought she hasnt pants on will this guy notice in the dark. He walked closer and said hi and started small talk with her and she started talking to her and he sat down beside her when i noticed her open he legs a little more he cant miss that now her skirt isnt covering her bare kitty. I found my cock getting hard and quietly unzipped and as i looked over saw his hand on her thigh rubbing it and she opened wide and grabbed his hand bringing it straight to her sex well in seconds it was a frenzy her being fingered him being unzipped and her head bobbing on his cock sucking making him hard. Next thing she says i need to be fucked and she gets on the bench sticking her ass out to him opening her legs and looking to where i was in the bush and grinning towards me. Soon he was in her rocking back and forth moaning and telling him to fuck her hard and i thought no condom he is going to empty his nuts and i almost came so stopped and just watched she started moaning and grunting and said im cumming fuck me fill me with spunk which he did slamming her into the bench pinning her to it as he emptied himself as far inside her as he could. My cock was twitching as he thanked her and told her he needed to get home soon and just left. I walked over to her grinning and still with my cock out which she kissed and asked did you enjoy i replied fuck yes that was hot and less than a minute of her sucking and teasing my balls she swallowed another load of my spunk. Now we call it going out for top up sex and do this whenever we can and she knows she can get a topup anytime she needs one

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was pretty hot. When I started dating my wife, she was still seeing other guys. I happened to go over to her house unannounced one night and as I was walking up the driveway, I noticed a car in the driveway rocking up and down. I slowly got closer and saw her riding another guy's cock in the back seat. That was hot as hell. I began to try to catch her again and got lucky a couple of times. Once, she was out on her parent's back deck and there were two guys with her. She was riding one and the other was watching. The guy she was riding kept bugging her to "just do it" and soon she called the other guy over and blew him whim bouncing on that dick. Eventually I told her I had watched her and loved it. I told her I wanted to spend the rest of my life with her and marry her one day. But...and a big but,....she had to agree to continue to date other guys. Hell, what woman wouldn't jump at that chance? All her friends are jealous.

Leroy371Leroy371about 2 years ago

To be honest i think you ruined the story. Your fetish is not the problem, but it would be nice to mention it at the beginning.

Still we didn´t know the truth about Sarah. It looks like she is a great slut who fucks many guys. At least ending with one guy is boring. And why suggest Tom should share the flat with John? She didn´t plan to cuck him, so it is a mistake in the storyline.

At the end it is a plain story. Saying she loves him and five minutes later she fucked John again. If she really loves him she would go with him. Out of John´s flat and talk with Tom about to stay together or quit. And then getting an own place to live.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I had caught my girlfriend actually we were engaged cheating. We didn't have a date set . We wanted to figure out job where we would live ect. I play along like I didn't know. She didn't know that I knew. Of course I was using protection. We had great sex. At our graduation her parents my parents were there. Graduates were seated alphabetical so we were apart. Of course her lover was seated right beside her. When it was over I seen them kiss a long kiss. I was planning on talking to her and letting her know that I was going to break up with her but that kiss done me in. I started walking to them. Just before I got there I took another picture. I was about to tap her on the shoulder when another girl grabbed her pulled her around and said you stupid cheating ****. You have the best man on campus and you're cheating on him I hope he catches you before he marries you. She walked away. That's when she seen me. She broke down crying. I thought yes right. I asked for my rings back and she grabbed her left hand with her right hand as if to protect her ring. I walked away with the ring. Went to my parents and they asked where she was? I said she was history. We left. We seen her parents and they asked where she was? I said with her lover the last time I seen her. You should have seen there face. I could write a lot more but long story short we did get married 2 years later. Of course I had a prenuptial agreement. Of course that asshole was beaten. I don't know who done it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

And he had proof of her cheating and sent it to all of her friends and family that he ha contact's with. In the middle of the night he was woken up by her beating on the room he was in. He had the door so no one could get in. He answered what do you want S***? What in the Hell didn't you have to do that shit for? I didn't want you to miss leed them like you miss lead me. Now I expect you and asshole to be gone by morning. That was the end of that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Yes baby this is so hot I glad you agreed to have this threesome especially with this big black dude I'm so proud of you doing it with me. You know that I would never cheat on you and go behind your back. I said I'm so glad you didn't go behind my back and cheat because I don't think that I could ever forgive you if you did. Thank you for signing the prenuptial agreement that if either cheated the cheater leaves with only personal belongings. This was said as I went first and Duke the big black guy was waiting for his turn. I finished by say love I can't wait to stick my hard on up his back door since you don't want to give it up for me. Duke said there ain't no way you are going to put that thing in me ain't no wonder she won't let you. Man you are bigger than me. You know the deal I said. He started putting his clothes on and said sorry man I didn't know that you were so hung. You could be a porn star. I said no wouldn't happen I'm too white. Lol!

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