All Comments on 'The Truth... Almost'

what has this got to do with remembering his sister it wasn't told as a memory

I hope there is a part two. I get the feeling there will be and I get the feeling that Tatiana is having sex with her brother also. That will be really hot and opens up many possibilities for another story

Can't wait to get more of this or more like it

not a memory so the subtitle is wrong needs a good editor and never finished all equals a negative 20. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING AND EITHER BE SURE TO FINISH IT IN A TIMELY FASHION OR DON'T BOTHER TO POST IT AT ALL NOW EITHER FINISH OR DELETE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

why did you only post the middle third of a story? wheres the background about how they got to this point? what does tatiana have to do with it? wheres the end? does the mother find out? does she get pregnant? the best thing you can do is delete it and rewrite it adding all the missing parts before reposting.