All Comments on 'The Truth Mirror'

Erotic writing that is pleasurable to read. This is not a wham bam thank u mam quick read. Seductive, sensual, sensitive - the writer does not disappoint.

In part 3 of the story you went from Mary to Ann with no explanation as to the change

but you do need to proof read a little more carefully.

you regularly get your and you mixed up for example.

Amazing was that word that popped into my mind when I finished your story and just had to say how much I enjoyed your submission.

Loved all the characters and found the story to flow and bring us along in this little tale, of discovery, love and acceptance.

Thank You for your time, skills and your creative soul and then sharing with us.

A sharp tale of a rollicking hot romp. Power to the writer to take our imagination where we would want to lick.

Long, sweet, and to the point!

Every story I read is better than the last. I really enjoy the characters and almost get to believe they could be real. Excellent read. Thank you.

Loved it! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Totally loved your story. I am about his age so maybe I still have a chance. Mind you I would have expired from exhaustion by page three.