All Comments on 'The Try Outs Ch. 01'

Nice. Quite nice. Well written and erotic as heck. As much as I enjoyed the daughter I did find myself looking forward to Amanda getting her freak on. Thanks for the read.

Yowza, don't know if I'm jealous of David or scared for him. Can't wait to see the next part.

Encarta proves that he's one of the best writers on Literotica hands down. The character build up, story lines and imagery are fantastic. I keep checking on his profile to see when he's written something new...Bravo!

As an Austin resident it hurts my eyes and ears to read "U of T." In the standard vernacular it's "UT."